Wednesday Words: Night’s Honor

Every once in awhile, a book comes along that makes me sit back and think, “Damn! I wish I’d written that.” That’s the way I feel about the latest addition to the Elder Races series by Thea Harrison. As I mentioned in my review of the book, while I love the series and the world, Ms. Harrison’s storytelling has sometimes been a bit uneven. But she made up for that in spades with NIGHT’S HONOR. You can read this book without reading any of the others but why would you want to miss the fun? As a brief background, Xavier is a former priest, the second son of a Spanish nobleman. His sister fell in love with a vampyre, and was turned, during the Spanish Inquisition. The couple was killed and Xavier sort of lost it. He went to Italy, pledged himself to Julian, King of the Vampyres, and well…he still serves Julian. Enter Tess, a smart girl with a big heart and protective streak that gets her in trouble. She ends up in Xavier’s employ because she’s hiding from a Big Bad–a pariah Djinn. So…

Anyway, here’s a few of the passage that grabbed me and refused to let me go.

Tess, upon being summoned to speak to Xavier:

…as she gripped the door handle, her muscles locked up and she stood frozen, unable to make herself step into the room and yet not able to walk away, while rapid-fire thoughts snapped at her heels like feral dogs.

“A beautiful woman is never irrelevant. She can be the most compelling, most gloriously dangerous creature in all the world.” ~Xavier, speaking to Tess

And finally, Xavier doing some introspection:

Desire might be an old friend whom he had met before, but with her, it came to him wearing a new face, sharp, bright, and joyful.

Happy Wednesday. I’m staring at my edits and thinking, Damn. I suck compared to that. But that’s okay. I have my own voice. And my words may not be as eloquent, but they work for me. Do any of you have words to share?

Advertisements

About Silver James

I like walks on the wild side and coffee. Lots of coffee. Warning: My Muse runs with scissors. Author of two award-winning series--Moonstruck and The Penumbra Papers, Red Dirt Royalty (Harlequin Desire) & other books! Purveyor of magic, mystery, mayhem and romance. Lots and lots of romance.
This entry was posted in Writing Life and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink.

4 Responses to Wednesday Words: Night’s Honor

  1. Your words do not suck. =op So there.

    Here’s a little character insight from Bloodflow: Not a day went by when he didn’t feel some trace of fear. He worked to instill it in others just to push it away from himself. Of course, he never succeeded, but he kept trying.

  2. * raises eyebrow* Lady your words do not suck!!!
    Everybody has there own voice, and it gets stronger the more you write.
    Good luck with the edits– have a good day!

    • Silver James says:

      *raises eyebrow back* You haven’t read my first drafts! 😆 And oh yeah, the more you write, the better. I look back and my early stuff and CRINGE!

      Edits make the world go round. Or something. 😉

Got something to say?

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s