Wednesday Words: Get Off of My Lawn

Since last week’s #1lineWed theme was *OLD*, I figured this week’s theme should be **YOUNG**. You know, for reasons! 😉 Anyway, it also gave me an idea of how to start the new WIP. At the moment, the working title is MONTANA MOON. This is a first draft so please ignore anything but content. And if it’s boring, PLEASE tell me!

Chapter 1

The phone rang and rang and rang. Tate thrust an arm dripping with soap and hot water out of the shower to grab the damn thing. He checked the caller ID before turning it off. The debrief could wait until morning. He dropped the phone back onto the counter and retreated under the scalding water pouring from the shower head. He’d been back from the retrieval Hank Patterson, his occasional employer at Brotherhood Protectors, sent him on all of 30 minutes. Two spoiled rich kids decided to hit the road in Mommy’s Mercedes. He caught the brats on the other side of the Mexican border, minus the Mercedes and in the hands of a cartel far more interested in human trafficking than was good for the two girls. Despite saving their lives and other things, they’d bitched at him all the way back to a multi-million dollar log mansion in Aspen, where the father of the car thief handed over a check with lots of zeros.

What the hell was wrong with young people today? Tate snorted and pictured himself in a rocking chair on his front porch and shaking a cane at those young whippersnappers. Laughing now, he leaned his hands on the granite tile lining his walk-in shower, head bent so the steaming liquid sluiced across his neck and shoulders. He was beat, going on close to 72 hours with no sleep. Back in the day when he’d been running special ops with the SEAL teams, that had been a walk in the park. Even his wolf half was tired. The critter wanted a rare steak, the man a six-pack of beer, and both about 24 hours of curling up in front of the fire and snoozing. Sounded damn fine idea.

Tate “Shooter” McCord was a Wolf. He carried the lupi versi pellis gene on his Y chromosome and that weird little DNA anomaly gave him the ability to shift from man to wolf and back again. He never got sick, healed faster than normal when injured—and considering he’d been a SEAL for almost 20 years, he’d needed that special kick more than once. Tonight, though, he was feeling his age—emotionally if not truly physically. He’d come back to the Crazy Mountains in Montana to lick his wounds after that last mission in Bumfuck, Afghanistan. The operation had been a Charlie Foxtrot from the git-go. They’d only lost one man but the entire unit had been shot up, with half of the team sustaining career-ending injuries. He’d joined them, especially after receiving the Navy Cross, the Silver Star, and the Purple Heart. All three medals made him feel like a fraud. Getting his teammates out wasn’t heroic. It was part of the job. So he’d retired and returned to a place that had been home once upon a time.

The water turned tepid and he turned off the faucet. After drying off, he pulled on a pair of jean shorts and wandered into the kitchen. The steak he picked up on the way home kissed the frying pan on both sides and then he was settled in front of the fire in his living room with the big screen TV showing some spring training baseball game. Ten minutes later, with his stomach full and headache finally receding, he closed his eyes and dropped into combat sleep.
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If your WIP is feeling a little young at heart, or has some young love, or youngsters, drop some words into the comments. 😉

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About Silver James

I like walks on the wild side and coffee. Lots of coffee. Warning: My Muse runs with scissors. Author of two award-winning series--Moonstruck and The Penumbra Papers, Red Dirt Royalty (Harlequin Desire) & other books! Purveyor of magic, mystery, mayhem and romance. Lots and lots of romance.
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4 Responses to Wednesday Words: Get Off of My Lawn

  1. Boring? Nope. Not even a little. I can’t wait to read this one in its entirety. =o)

    Here’s a bit of Blink of an I that might fit the theme…

    “What makes you think I could be anything special, when I’m not what you wanted?”
    “First of all, you’ve been trained by the Union, is that right?”
    “More than that, sir. I was raised by them.”
    “Raised by them?” A glimmer grew in his eyes, making them decades younger.
    “Yes, sir. Raised by them, trained by them… I owe them every—”
    “Stop right there. You don’t owe them one damn thing, and I think once we’re through talking you’ll understand why. So, for now, let’s leave them out of this. They’ve had enough of you already.” Russell’s voice grew thick and he cleared his throat. “They’ve had you your whole life?”
    Mary opened her mouth to answer, but he continued as if she wasn’t really there. “This is even better than I thought. You’re entirely a product of the Union, but still, you had the wherewithal to come into this place of your own free will. That, my dear, is just amazing. Your whole life?”
    “As far back as I can remember…” Mary’s words drifted off as she tried to retrieve her earliest memories. Every memory featured some cold woman in a jumper the color of the evening sun giving her orders. Without warning an image replaced those Orange-casted women, and she could see herself sitting as though she was on someone’s lap. A man’s voice whispered in her ear, and she giggled. Then the vision was gone, and a loneliness swept over her like none she’d had since she was small. Shaking her head to clear away the melancholy, she said, “I was a foundling.”

  2. Diane says:

    Thanks for the sneak peak, I love it. I enjoy all of your books and especially like the moonstruck books.

    • Silver James says:

      Thanks, Diane! There’s a very short prologue before this chapter, in the heroine’s POV, which sort of sets things up. So far, I’m really liking my patchwork* scenes that are already written. 🙂

      *This refers to my writing process–I write seemingly unrelated scenes then piece them together like a jigsaw puzzle or patchwork quilt. 🙂

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