Wednesday Words: Gonna Need That

With CROSSFIRE in the revision and editing stage (or so close as to be the same thing) last week, I got to play with the Boston Wolves for the #ThursdayThread prompt of **”You’re going to need that.” The best part of this–besides new words for the Moonstruck Mafia book–the the fact that I wrote a scene that I wasn’t aware of even needing. Until I wrote it. And then I knew exactly where it needed to go in the story, and how I’d skipped over this lead in. I might have figured it out when I got around to editing but now it’s done. A big ol’ pat on the back to my subconscious (aka Iffy the Muse) for putting this together. The scene is pretty much self-explanatory.
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The morning had been a complete waste of his time. First it was the mix-up in the liquor order for the bar. Then there’d been a dust up on the docks and he’d made too many phone calls. Brian Boru called needing information on some possible business the partners. While the old man left most of the work that came with running the organization to Ronan, the old man still kept his hand in the pot—usually the illegal stuff. Brian knew Ronan was working to take the mob legit—at least as much as possible. There’d always been lines that not even Brian would cross—human trafficking the biggest. The information he’d gathered meant he’d have to deal with the gang that had made this new business proposal. And that meant doing it the old way.

Ronan looked up as his brother entered the office. Without a word, Mick strode to the built-in bar, snagged an Irish crystal highball glass and poured a generous splash of Irish whiskey into it. Still silent, he approached the desk and set the drink in front of Ronan.

“What’s this then?” he asked.

“Drink it.”

“And why should I be drinkin’ in the middle of the day?”

“You’re going to need that.”

He didn’t touch the glass but he leaned forward, his entire attention focused on Mick. “What’s happened?”

“Nothing. Yet.”

“Just a guess here, but I’m thinkin’ yet must be the operative word.”

“Aye, Ronan.”

“Who died?”

“No one. Yet.”

“And there’s that word again. Fine. Who needs killing then?”

Mick snorted out a laugh. “Now that ’twould be a long list, yeah?”

Ronan leveled an alpha stare on his brother. “I’ve got actual work t’be doin’, Mick. Spill it or get on with yer day and leave me in peace.”

Mick returned to the bar and poured whiskey into a second glass. He tossed it back before he faced Ronan. “It’s the Brannigan woman.”

Ronan went very still. Under his icy stare, Mick grabbed the first glass he’d filled off the desk and drained it too. Sadly, as a Wolf, the alcohol was more for show and taste than any sort of actual palliative effect. He briefly met his brother’s gaze then lowered his eyes.

“What about Maura?” Ronan’s voice was all teeth and claws.

“Someone wants her dead.”
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And there you have it. I’m really looking forward to getting back to this book. It has the capability of being a LONG book. I mean, like 100K words. So a question to readers today. Do you prefer shorter books or long ones? And writers, what “that” are you going to need today? (Feel free to riff on the prompt!)

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About Silver James

I like walks on the wild side and coffee. Lots of coffee. Warning: My Muse runs with scissors. Author of several award-winning series--Moonstruck, Nightriders MC, The Penumbra Papers, and Red Dirt Royalty (Harlequin Desire) & other books! Purveyor of magic, mystery, mayhem and romance. Lots and lots of romance.
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6 Responses to Wednesday Words: Gonna Need That

  1. Latesha B.'s avatar Latesha B. says:

    As long as the story is good, I don’t care about the length of a book. Well, if it’s too short, then I care. So glad you are getting back to this story. Congratulations on finishing Crossfire.

    • Silver James's avatar Silver James says:

      I’m with you! A complete story can be told in a novella, especially if it’s attached to an established world–and is priced accordingly! Cuz, I’m cheap, don’cha know. LOL And thanks. I’m relieved to be in the edit/revision phase!

  2. Kimber's avatar Kimber says:

    Im looking forward to you getting back to Boston😉.
    How are we already in the end of July???
    But that puts me closer to Denver in Sept😊

    • Silver James's avatar Silver James says:

      September and October are good months to hit Denver! And I’m with you!!! Where has this year gone??!!?!?! I’m ready to get back to Boston too, though it’s been fun to hang out with the HT guys!

  3. bookwyrm217's avatar bookwyrm217 says:

    I guess it does depend on the story. I don’t mind a long book, as long as it’s GOOD!!!

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