Thoughts On Outlanders “The Wedding”

Borrowed from Starz.com

Borrowed from Starz.com

No treats, titles, or teases today. Not because I’m out of recipes, books, or writing snippets but because I’m jealous and I want to discuss that. To those of you who don’t have STARZ and haven’t been able to watch OUTLANDER, I apologize for waxing “fangirl” over this series so often. I haven’t read the book. I probably will at some point when my schedule evens out and I can dive into a book that long. But the series? Doin’ the fangirl dance over here. And surprisingly, as hot and sexy as Jamie is, as feisty and strong as Claire is, as maddening but sexy as Dougal is, and as comic-relieving as Rupert and Angus are? All those things total just a tiny reason why I’m so hooked on the show.

Production values. OMG! People, people, people! Granted, it’s pretty darn hard to screw up the scenery. Like New Orleans, the Scottish highlands becomes a character of the story–almost a living, breathing entity. The costumes! Historically correct in all their discomfort and yet I think we all want some of the knitted goods Claire wears and a few of her dresses. And Jamie’s kilt (or at least what’s under it… shifty-eyes-ani2faster ) The set dressing, the horses, the clansmen and women, the villagers…it’s all so realistic–beautiful and terrible at the same time. The story doesn’t pull any punches. People get dirty and stay dirty. Bathing is often a pan of cold water poured over the head–or a cold stream. The show portrays all that.

But now I want to discuss The Wedding. I’m pretty sure social media lit up. There was naked Jamie and Claire. There was some hot loving–though not graphic. The director left a LOT up to the imagination. But now we’re getting to the reason I’m jealous. My writing is frequently described as “cinematic.” I write in multiple POVs and my scenes are often structured like the scene in a TV show or movie. When I write a scene, I see it in my head as a series of…camera angles, if you will. But The Wedding did something I would love to do as a writer but I’ve never figured out how to do what they did into the written word–at least not to the inspiring degree the show achieves.

The episode starts shortly after the marriage ceremony and wedding dinner/lunch/breakfast(?) in the pub. Claire and Jamie are alone in a room above the public house. Clair is sitting in her shift, corset, underskirt, etc. Jamie enters, wearing his shirt, kilt, and boots. After a bit of rather awkward interaction, the episode turns pure magic. They talked and drank and shared a plate, sharing these stories while the viewer is shown the action. They were interrupted by Rupert and Angus–checking to see if they’d done it yet to make the marriage legal to keep Claire safe from Captain Randall. The “backstory” unfolded in a series of magnificent flashbacks that felt both immediate and were damn fine storytelling. I’m in awe and truly wish I could figure out how to layer backstory in that seamlessly. Yes, I’m babbling. And here’s a short video where the producer, Ron D. Moore, explains his thinking. Yeah, I REALLY like the way he thinks. Now to figure out how to translate it into my writing…

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Monday Mischief

funnydogs MY coffeeYeah, I’m a little snarly this morning. I don’t have a lot to say. I’m feeling a bit overwhelmed as I realize I have an October 1st deadline for revisions on THE COWGIRL’S LITTLE SECRET. I’m almost to the muppet flail stage but I have a weekend before it’s due so I can hide in my writing cave for 48 hours if necessary.

Writing stuffs: I should have been working this past weekend but it was the OKRWA retreat. Ended up with only 4 of us spending the two nights at the guest house we leased, with two more coming in for the day on Saturday. It worked out great because we each got our own bedroom. We shared food, laughter, made some new in-jokes, and hopefully, the others got a kick-start of some WIPs that had stalled for them. I did a workshop on ways to jump-start a writer’s creativity to get through writer’s block. It was fun and everyone seemed to enjoy it. I tried to work on Saturday afternoon while the others did a workshop on the “Save the Cat” writing process. I worked through some minor threads but the major stuff eluded me. I did get some great ideas for WIPs that may never see the light of day due to sheer lack of time. Ah well.

TV stuffs: GOTHAM premieres tomorrow night, SLEEPY HOLLOW starts the new season, and FOREVER premiers. GOTHAM is about the beginnings of Batman and Commissioner Gordon when they were Bruce Wayne the scared kid and Detective Gordon. All the baddies are introduced in their kid/teen personas. FOREVER stares Ioan Gruffudd. It’s worth it just see him- 😆 -but the premise is interesting. He’s immortal and every time he dies–which seems to be a lot, he comes right back to the same place. He’s a pathologist with the NYC ME’s office. Then we have NCIS and NCIS New Orleans on Tuesday. Woot-woot! There’s some other shows I’m interested in that I can’t remember at the moment.

Reading stuffs: I’ve read stuff but nothing that sticks with me enough to say “GO READ THIS!” I’ll see if I can’t fix that by next week.

Other stuffs: This week’s schedule may be a little different. I want to do a blog about Saturday’s episode of OUTLANDER. And no, it probably isn’t what you think though there was Jamie butt. NAKED Jame butt! For realz!!!! Yeah. I was swooning. 😉

So how was your weekend?

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Friday Sinema – Longmire

Longmire is/was one of those shows you really liked or didn’t care much for. Me? I loved it. It was the only reason I watched A&E. It’s consistently been one of their highest rated show but…hrm…it didn’t track well in the 18-24 age group so they cancelled it. Seriously? Why do networks, etc. cater to that age group? Most of them are living at home, paying off school loans for degrees they can’t use. It’s the older demographic where Longmire was highly rated that has money to spend on goods and services. So anyway, A&E cancelled the show. On a massive cliffhanger. Like they did with The Glades. The producers, stars, and fans, have a grass root effort going to find the show a home on a better, smarter network. When I saw this video on Facebook, I wanted to share it because damn if it doesn’t sum up the show and why I watched it in four minutes.

Have a great weekend!

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Universal Daylight Savings Time

universeI needed this message today. My routine has yet to settle with the arrival of the Magic Bean Sprout in my daily sphere. I have to reassess priorities and time and schedules. Getting bent out of shape over stuff I can’t change is not only impractical, it is counterproductive. So…tomorrow is a new day, a new outlook, and I shall spend my time differently.

There’s so much time in a day, Silver.

You could have breakfast, lunch, and dinner on 3 different continents.

You could outline the book you’re going to write, start the screenplay adaptation, and watch “Gone With The Wind,” before the sun even sets.

Spend a day at work, and still have 16 hours left over.

Or you could just think 60,000 different thoughts as you tool all over.

Hey, the record for climbing Mt. Everest is under 9 hours, leaving 15 to nap and go Yeti searching. There’s so much time in a day, Silver. So much.

You’re rich,
The Universe
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Especially, Silver, when one stops claiming there’s so little of it, huh?

How about the rest of you?

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Wednesday Words: Cowgirls Don’t Cry

Cowgirls Dont Cry 680 Pardon me while I continue riding the wave of awesomeness that is my cover for COWGIRLS DON’T CRY. I have more news to share–and a new contest–this week but it will come Friday. I thought I’d post some of my favorite lines from COWGIRLS today.

Chance Barron always knew exactly what he wanted. At the moment, he’d set his sights on the attractive blonde sitting at the hotel bar.

Yeah, that blonde would be Cassie Morgan, the heroine. But…Cass has other things on her mind.

Cassidy Morgan leaned against the window in the hotel lobby, her cell phone pressed to her ear. Outside, fat cotton balls of snow drifted across her view—like staring into the heart of a giant snow globe. Dizzy and a tad claustrophobic, her equilibrium thrown off both physically and emotionally, she closed her eyes.

Because, she just said goodbye to her dad…

How could she absorb the enormity of this event and not let it drive her to her knees? She closed her eyes against the prickle of tears. She didn’t cry. Not in public. Hadn’t she learned that from her dad? Cowgirls were tough. Well, dammit, she wasn’t a cowgirl. Not anymore. Not for a long time.

And because this IS a Harlequin Desire, you know there has to be some sexy-fun stuffs…

And now Mr. Chancellor was pulling up in her front yard. Buddy leaped off the porch and charged the truck, dancing and barking as the driver’s-side door opened and six-foot plus of sexy man stepped out. Since she’d last seen him, she’d done her best to convince her libido that the man was not nearly as hot as she remembered.

Her libido doubled over in laughter.

There are more but I don’t want to give away the whole story! I really like Chance and Cassie. They’re good together–or would be if they’d get out of each other’s way. *bwahaha* Anybody have any words to share? And don’t forget, if you’re on Twitter, that Kiss of Death is hosting it’s #1lineWed meme on Twitter. This week’s theme is settings. Stop by to see what everyone is sharing! Happy Hump Day!

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Tuesday Titles: Cowgirls Don’t Cry Cover Reveal

Can I get a Woot Woot? At long last, I get to reveal the cover to my very first Harlequin Desire, from the Red Dirt Royalty series, COWGIRLS DON’T CRY!!! I ❤ this cover like damn and whoah! Seriously. It's perfect for the story! And yes, I have exceeded my weekly quota of exclamation points, but…but…Serious cover love!

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The wealthiest of enemies might just seduce the ranch out from under her!

Cassidy Morgan wasn’t raised a crybaby. So when her father dies and leaves the family ranch vulnerable to takeover by an Okie gazillionaire with a grudge, she doesn’t shed a tear, she fights back.

But Chance Barron, the son of said gazillionaire, is a too-sexy adversary. In fact, it isn’t until Cassidy falls head over heels for the sexy cowboy-hat-wearing attorney that she even finds out he’s the enemy. Now she needs a plucky plan to save her birthright. But Chance has another plan up his sleeve, putting family loyalties–and passion–to the ultimate test.

A family feud, a reluctant cowgirl, a man in way over his head, and an old-fashioned cattle drive in modern-day Oklahoma… Yeah, cowgirls don’t cry, they get even.

Release date is January 15, 2015. And there will be fun things happening prior to the release! I will have author copies. And really cool bling. And fun contests and things. But that’s for later in the year. In the meantime, what do y’all think? Thumbs up or down? And don’t forget to check out the Red Dirt Royalty page for preorder and Goodreads links!

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Monday of Awesomesauce

cute-puppy-pictures-hello-im-here-to-make-your-monday-suck-less Weekend wrap-up: I stayed in bed most of Saturday. Between sinuses and charley horses the night before, I wanted to sleep. But I ended up reading. FESTIVE IN DEATH. I loved it, though it wasn’t a typical In Death book. I described it in my Goodreads review as a “Kinder, gentler In Death book.” It was. And while I hope the next one is gripping, I enjoyed the heck out of this one because Eve’s character arc was amazing!

Sports: Cards swept the Rockies and are still leading the NL Central for post-season play. My OSU (Oklahoma State) won. That pretender OSU won, too. Against Kent state. Seriously? When was the last time Kent State won a football game. Oh, and VA Tech, the unranked team that beat Ohio State the previous week and got ranked? Yeah, they got beat by East Carolina, ANOTHER unranked team. But you can bet, the pretender will be in the top 25. And the real OSU STILL won’t be ranked except by the AP poll and that’s at #25. Mother*muttermutter* goose. Ah well. Upward and onward! Oh, and OU won, too. So my teams swept this weekend. Sports life is good.

News. There will be some this week. 😉 First…this:

FAERIE FAITH goes on sale November 10, 2014. Price: $2.99

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Abhean, the fae harper, is exiled to the mortal realm until he finds the other half of his heart. As Venn McLyre, the NYC street musician, he has no memory of his true nature—or his magic. When he steps in to save reluctant bride, Gwyneth Riley, he could lose more than his heart—he could lose his immortality.

Socialite Gwyn Riley is resigned to marrying Sumner Barrett, son of her mother’s best friend. A marriage based on duty to family and convenience, she has no pretensions about love. It takes the magic touch of a poor musician to ope! n her heart to the possibilities. When three couples arrive to remind Venn of his identity, he has only moments to stop Gwyn’s wedding. Is he too late, or will the King of Tir Nan Óg step in to grant Abhean and Gywn their own happy ever after?

Be sure to check in tomorrow for more news. I’ll have a fun treat for Tuesday! 😉 And there will be contests this week. 🙂

How about the rest of you? Good weekend? How was your weather? Temps here have been loverly and we had rain Saturday. It. Was. Awesomesauce!

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Friday Sinema – Kimmel’s Fashion Week

I caught this on the news last night and gigglesnorted so I had to share the laughs. People are so eager to appear smart and hip and…well…just watch. And yes, I am a sucker for this type of prank. Happy Friday! Enjoy your weekend.

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Lost Souls in the Universe

Y’all know what today is. And you’ll remember where you were when you heard the news. I’m torn between watching the news to see if our enemies will strike again, and wanting to hide from the world and pretend that all is well. I’d been saving this message from the Universe, though I didn’t know why. Until today.

In remembrance of 9/11/2001:

There’s no such thing as a lost soul, Silver.

I know where they are, and everyone makes it home.

Thanks for caring,
The Universe
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The things that mystify you, Silver, need not worry you.

Tell the people you love that you do. Live your dreams. Thank you for being a part of my life.

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Wednesday Words – Moonstruck Reread

glasses-keyboardI’ve been doing a reread of the Moonstruck books before hitting edits and revisions on BLUE MOON. The main reason is to build/rebuild the wiki/series bible so I remember the timeline, among other things. In doing so, I’ve tumbled across some lines that made me laugh, or sniffle, or roll my eyes. I thought I’d share some here for this week’s Wednesday Words.

From BLOOD MOON:

Major Hannah Jackson had a mean mouth on her when she was caffeine deprived. ~Ian “Mac” McIntire

Meals Ready to Eat, the military’s version of Hell’s Kitchen.

“Sometimes the gods get cranky or bored and they play a practical joke on us. Sometimes they are just pissed.” ~Jacob Nakai

And other bits and pieces:

“Believe what you cannot prove but feel in your heart to be true.” ~Tala Nakai, BAD MOON

Boomer was a biker. A Big Bad Ass. He drank. He swore. And he probably busted up bars in fights he started. But as she sat there watching, he was simply a tender giant teaching her son how to throw a baseball. ~Annie Simmons, thinking about Sean Donaldson, WOLF MOON

The members of the Wolf Pack weren’t the brightest. If brains were C4, they wouldn’t have enough between them to blow their noses. ~Sean Donaldson’s thoughts on the Wolf Pack MC, WOLF MOON

He did what he always did when it hurt too much. He called Mac to report and then he stripped. Raising his arms to that half-assed moon, he changed. The heartache the man carried could be forgotten by the wolf, could be buried in the thrill of the hunt even if the wolf no longer killed. No. Killing was left up to the man. ~ about Sean Donaldson, WOLF MOON

Happy Hump Day. And here. This is my model for Sean, just in case y’all were wondering… You’re welcome. (If you click on the pic, it’ll get bigger. Just sayin’… 😉 )
Sean -Boomer- Donaldson (Matt Schaefer)

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